Max – The number of font contrasts in this Tshirt design is… a lot! But, maybe that is the point. OK good. Now… next step is to look at the shape of each word, and each item, and “fit” them together. I’ve mentioned a jigsaw puzzle as an example of how shapes can appear to “fit” together. Another analogy would be a stone pathway. What this needs is more of an awareness of the negative space around and between the elements. Think about it, and playing with the sizes of your elements might help them shift a bit to tuck into each other. Question: do you need all 4 illustrations? I wonder if 3 would do the job… and help the composition a bit.
Max – The number of font contrasts in this Tshirt design is… a lot! But, maybe that is the point. OK good. Now… next step is to look at the shape of each word, and each item, and “fit” them together. I’ve mentioned a jigsaw puzzle as an example of how shapes can appear to “fit” together. Another analogy would be a stone pathway. What this needs is more of an awareness of the negative space around and between the elements. Think about it, and playing with the sizes of your elements might help them shift a bit to tuck into each other. Question: do you need all 4 illustrations? I wonder if 3 would do the job… and help the composition a bit.
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