Both of these would need the coffee cups and flowers illustrated.
They have a vertical version of the Habitat logo, which I don't yet have a copy of. For the design with the daffodil, I would get a copy of it, make it a little bigger, and move the green text box down a little.
The gold-trimmed coffee cup would need the design simplified a bit, and I would need to fix the fish-eye distortion.
Julie – I think that #1 (with the orange and red flowers in white cup) is ready to show the client. The only thing I suggest that you change would be to remove the periods after the Book Title and website.
ReplyDelete#2. Question: Does the photo end where you have feathered the top of the plant? I bet is does, and it seems to be a pretty awkward ending into that white space. Could you use a feathered oval shape rather than a rectangle? Maybe using a oval vignette would make more sense, so we would be seeing all of the photo possible in an oval… a less abrupt end that we see currently.
I wonder if the word “SPRING” could actually sit on the bottom of his portrait, so we don’t see (another) cut off image on the page. Make the bottom of his silhouette make sense on the page… another place to use that would be lower right on the page, so the bleed takes care of the visual abrupt picture end.
List with dingbats… wrapping that list, FL, around the image makes more send to me than FR.
Those are my thoughts!