This is the client logo for a local lamp working shop. They have already descided this is what they want. I fixed some of the type as per peer review and some other details we have discussed last class.
Well, knowing the client has chosen this I don't suspect you want to entertain the idea of a change... but since it's here, I'll make a suggestion. Do you see the trapped neg space below the word LABS? It forms a shape. How can you release that shape - since that shape doesn't do anything for the design? Consider putting LABS on a curved path following the edge of the circle along its bottom? Then the placement of the words "Viral Glass" would need to be reconsidered. But... it might be worth the effort in the end - that trapped shape at the very bottom weakens the design a bit. In my opinion.
Well, knowing the client has chosen this I don't suspect you want to entertain the idea of a change... but since it's here, I'll make a suggestion. Do you see the trapped neg space below the word LABS? It forms a shape. How can you release that shape - since that shape doesn't do anything for the design? Consider putting LABS on a curved path following the edge of the circle along its bottom? Then the placement of the words "Viral Glass" would need to be reconsidered. But... it might be worth the effort in the end - that trapped shape at the very bottom weakens the design a bit. In my opinion.
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